Not sure how you could have improved the composition if you had a painter’s control over the elements; everything balances beautifully.
I especially enjoy the bus in the background, imagining the seats are bus seats. And the irony of sitting under the hot side of an air conditioning unit.
Tyler, thanks for the positive feedback! My first take at this scenery was in the kill-the-clutter mode, just seats and AC, but in comparison to this image it came out too plump, simple, without depth.
Seconding Tyler and more: the two black rectangles on the wall on the right in connection with the bus (?) seats on the left …
Martina, I was happy to find such a balancing element. Cropping them out for a test left the image very one-sided.
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